stone 8 partly sunny

High white watery billows
sail across the shining blue
casting shadows on my mother.

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5 Responses to stone 8 partly sunny

  1. Mr. Walker says:

    Brenda, I love “high white watery billows” for clouds. I think any sense of mother works.


  2. wolfsrosebud says:

    Lovely use of words.

  3. Tilly Bud says:

    I thought you meant your own mother as well. Makes it doubly interesting.

  4. vivinfrance says:

    So unexpected – your last line!

    • brenda w says:

      Viv, I meant my mother Earth… I wonder if you took it as my mom, Karen. ha! Does that make a difference? It’s always so interesting to know what the reader brings to a piece.

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